Monday, January 16, 2012

Story Orgy Monday_Even Steven part 3

Don't blink too slowly. Time is flying and I wouldn't want you to miss all the goodies that 2012 has in store for you. Happy Story Orgy Monday and MLK Jr. Day!

Before we get to my Hook Up for the week, I wanted to let you know about my muse's new release. Em Woods is featured in the anthology His Hero. So, stop by and check out Em's featured hotties in Only Sam. And while you're at it, hop on by and vote for Story Orgy's anthology Word Play. Dawn's Reading Nook will take real good care of you and Story Orgy appreciates your votes.   

And now, for part three of Even Steven. Remember, it's a short one this week *snickers*. Next week I'll let you have a longer one *stifles laughter*. However, look at that fine specimen of yumminess Jade Basier selected for this week's prompt *points down*. Do you see that...erm...I mean him? *sigh* Look at that smile...


Even Steven part 3

Steven glanced at the angry scowl marring Braden's face. Even as a kid he had been slow to anger, but heaven forbid when his fuse got lit. Like the mother of bad timing, Steven’s phone vibrated and he rolled his eyes. When he saw it was his little brother, his concern shifted from their predicament to Danny. "Whassup?"

Steven's stomach turned at Danny’s hurried whispers. He assured his brother they were on their way and hung up as the door flew open. Nora's husband stood towering over them, sawed-off shotgun in hand. Nora cowered behind him, eyes full of fear, tears streaming down her face.

"Nora, you okay?" Steven slid his phone back in his pocket. He unclenched his fists, stamping down the fury in his gut.

Nora nodded, turning away.

I don’t have time for this.

"Don," Steven slapped his palm flat to Braden's chest then began pushing him away from the house. "We're leaving. No trouble, okay?"

"Yeah. We're gone." Braden's hands were in the air.

Once Steven got the car up the road a ways, Braden broke the silence in the car. "That motherfucker has some nerve!"

"We don't have time to fuck with him right now. We've gotta get to Danny."

"Why?" Braden asked.

"He's at that 24-hr coffee shop pulling an all-nighter, before exams. He said some guy is watching him."

"What the fuck?"

"Yeah. And Danny said he's built like a brick shit house."

"Antonio?"

"Yup." Steven's foot lay heavier on the gas pedal.
    
<<TBC>>

What a freaking psycho town! Are they experimenting with the water or something? Sheesh! Okay, we should learn more next week. For now, let's go check on the other Story Orgy writers. You'll be glad you did. C'mon! We can go together...Click...

4 comments:

  1. Holy crap! That is one messed up town!! Love these posts, can't wait to see where this story is going. Great work, JR!

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  2. Oh Oh!! I definitely like MY Antonio better than yours! bad bad Antonio!! and poor poor Danny! I hope they'll be there in time to "save" him!!

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  3. I wanna visit this town with my middle sister...and leave her there *giggles and heads desk*...this is really intriguing JR! I can't wait for next week! :D

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  4. JR's been taking lessons from Hank- leaving us on the edge of our seats! Not cool!

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